blog feedback and learner response

WWW

·         Use of subject specific terminology – ‘Hypodermic needle theory’ and ‘self-publicised’ both used with examples.

·         Clear and balanced arguments which you have provided sufficient advantages and disadvantages for each industry.

EBI

Clearer sentence structure – pay more attention to grammar and word choice. You have relevant content but you need to proof read your work to check it makes grammatical sense for your reader. Perhaps you could print it out and read it aloud and make changes in pen and edit these after?

LR

1. Rewrite conclusion paragraph – this should simply summarise your whole essay and support your introduction.

2. Check SPaG throughout essay

Work missing:

Ayham – you have made a fantastic start to Media! You are always on task and your blog is quite up to date. Below is a list of some work that needs to be posted on your blog ASAP. Each task has the link to the work on Media Macguffin. In January, you will have an assessment and this will go towards your interim. All of the work below will act as good revision to do well in your assessment. Some of the tasks require you to use Photoshop so you will need to come to Media to use the computers. Any questions come and ask me.

1. Learner Response task

http://mediamacguffingcsenewspec.blogspot.co.uk/2017/10/blog-feedback-and-learner-response.html

2. Audience Profile Task – Photoshop

http://mediamacguffingcsenewspec.blogspot.co.uk/2017/10/audience-demographics-social-class.html

3. Psychographics

http://mediamacguffingcsenewspec.blogspot.co.uk/2017/11/audience-psychographics.html

4. Reception Theory (Stuart Hall – Harry Brown analysis)

http://mediamacguffingcsenewspec.blogspot.co.uk/2017/12/audience-reception-theory.html

 2.The word count for my essay was 1069 words
3.My strongest paragraph was the one where I talked about the music Industry because I have added a lot of media terminology .